Don't know if I already commented here, but don't care. I can't express just how hyped I am for this. Like, I'm checking their tumblr and this page every. day. for updates. Like, a yandere IF?! mOfO, get out the way before I run you over on my way here.
Thank you! And yes! Yanderes are more common in visual novels, maybe because to like VNs, you must have liked anime/manga at some point before, where you were introduced to the yandere trope. Kinda like a pipeline.
And you don't have to like anime/manga beforehand to enjoy IFs. At most, you can find some toxic romances, but true yandere characters are a rarity.
Also, I feel like VNs (and their consumers) allow for more disturbing content and unhealthy LIs than IFs do.
I absolutely love the concept, consider me a dedicated fan. I was wanting to write something that had a slightly similar concept but I have zero motivation to do something like this, no coding knowledge, and even less talent for it ☹️ i'm glad someone out there shares the idea but actually has the skill and ambition to make it happen. 💫 Thank you so much for making this!
Hey, if I can do it, then you can do it too!! All my writing experience consists of six fanfics that flopped, I had zero coding knowledge prior to this (can pass you the links I used to learn), and I have typos everywhere because English is my second language.
Thank you for the kind words, and I totally believe you're capable of doing something like this if you ever want to!!
Shit. An actually solid start to what seems to be a solid fantasy story! Didn't expect this since I came initially for the Yandere tag and erotic tag combination which is really rare. Is there anyway we could choose the gender of the yandere since from what I've read its originally planned for them to be male? Some typos though but so rare I'd miss it if I blinked. GJ!
Thank you for the kind words! Dark Impulses may be an erotic yandere story first, but I have always been fond of "porn with plot".
And yes, the yandere is planned to be male. I'm not really interested in attracting the highest number of readers, so I'm taking liberties and just writing what I really want, haha
I'm happy that my typos didn't bother you! My first language is Spanish, and I don't have any beta readers, so I can't really do much about that! :(
Thank you! Chapter 1 was planned to be released this month, but since I had the masochist idea of having three different plotlines, it's becoming a monster to write, haha! Still, this way you'll feel like choices really matter, so it's going to be worth it.
I'm updating the game before November ends anyway, but it will just have one plotline, I'm doing this since I promised my followers on Tumblr new content and I want to keep my word. The complete Chapter 1... may be done in two months, haha...
Amazing story and I love the variation with text choices. I hope that further progress will come and that this game gets all the recognition it deserves! ^^
THIS LOOKS SO GOOD, very promising from the premise of the prologue to the main theme of corruption (+18 too WOOOOH)!!! I always wanted to play a relationship where the love interest sees the main character and straight up goes "Are you tired of being nice? Don't you just want to go ape shit?" so thank you for your services especially as your first project (thats awesome), corruption doesn't miss <3
I like redemption arcs as much as the next person, but corruption arcs?? Those are my favorite! I want the game to be very flexible, so your fall from grace can be as slow (or fast) as you want. Maybe you’ll even end up becoming too much for the LI, haha!
I love this so far! I saw a typo, it's when MC is running away "Look kid, we're taking you whenever you want it or not" I'm guessing it's supposed to be whether.
Anyway! Omg I'm so excited for the first chapter! This is right up my alley, will Aiken be an ongoing character and possible LI?
No no no no I want both revenge I want a fucking war Not just a normal war a holy war I'm being personal in this story but you You did a good job Make me feel like this. There are things you should never do Force children to be a sacrifice Or make them be soldiers For your religion Say it was just cause I mean that shows the rot Of your organization In my opinion I think there's more That I am Going to hate in this organization I am being forced into Though I can't wait and see You're gonna throw at me Timidlon And I wish you a good luck on what you're making here
Need to say, I'm in love with the premise of this game! What little we see in this short demo is enough to foreshadow the corruption of this world, and I'm so excited to see what the rest of the story has in store! My one regret is our mother tho, I do worry about what happened to her :/
Do you perhaps have a development blog for this game? I'd love to keep myself updated on this IF :D
Ahhhh!! Thank you! This is just me laying the groundwork for the good stuff, so I hope you like the things to come! And hey, thanks for being the first commenter <3
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Excited for more !!
I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!
not usually a person who consumes much yandere content but i see a lot of potential here. :) Will definitely be keeping and eye on this one!
Surprisingly short, but extremely interesting!
I know it may be a dumb question but I was wondering if we will be ale to defy the church? I just feel there's something wrong with it. :P
Aa that was surprisingly short
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hypeeee i love yanderes <3 looking forward to see the rest!
Simply amazing, I'll be waiting impatiently for more
Don't know if I already commented here, but don't care. I can't express just how hyped I am for this. Like, I'm checking their tumblr and this page every. day. for updates. Like, a yandere IF?! mOfO, get out the way before I run you over on my way here.
...
any ways, no pressure.
Hahaha!! Thank you, this was very nice to read. Unfortunately, I'm a slow writer, but I'm making progress!!
excited to read more!!
Thanks <3!
so very excited to continue this, you’ve really intrigued me with the beginning and a yandere twine game has been something I’ve wanted for ages!
Thank you! And yes! Yanderes are more common in visual novels, maybe because to like VNs, you must have liked anime/manga at some point before, where you were introduced to the yandere trope. Kinda like a pipeline.
And you don't have to like anime/manga beforehand to enjoy IFs. At most, you can find some toxic romances, but true yandere characters are a rarity.
Also, I feel like VNs (and their consumers) allow for more disturbing content and unhealthy LIs than IFs do.
But this is just my theory, of course!
Hello, I like the concept for this game. However, will it ever be possible to choose the Yandere's gender, or is his character set in stone?
Thank you, and I'm afraid the yandere won't be customizable.
ah, I understand. Good luck on your game.
when i try to play it in browser it says that something is wrong and it's aborting ;-;
Edit. It says
A fatal error has occurred. Aborting.
Error: no valid storage adapters found.
Hi! I'm sorry to hear that, I uploaded a new file right now, maybe you can play this one?
I'll try again! It also might have just been my computer lol
I absolutely love the concept, consider me a dedicated fan. I was wanting to write something that had a slightly similar concept but I have zero motivation to do something like this, no coding knowledge, and even less talent for it ☹️ i'm glad someone out there shares the idea but actually has the skill and ambition to make it happen. 💫 Thank you so much for making this!
Hey, if I can do it, then you can do it too!! All my writing experience consists of six fanfics that flopped, I had zero coding knowledge prior to this (can pass you the links I used to learn), and I have typos everywhere because English is my second language.
Thank you for the kind words, and I totally believe you're capable of doing something like this if you ever want to!!
well....came for the erotic yandere and stayed for the plot lmao,
this looks amazing and the storyline is so captivating!! I can't wait for more!
Haha, thank you! I wanted to make it more than just an erotic IF, to make it more enjoyable!
Shit. An actually solid start to what seems to be a solid fantasy story! Didn't expect this since I came initially for the Yandere tag and erotic tag combination which is really rare. Is there anyway we could choose the gender of the yandere since from what I've read its originally planned for them to be male? Some typos though but so rare I'd miss it if I blinked. GJ!
Thank you for the kind words! Dark Impulses may be an erotic yandere story first, but I have always been fond of "porn with plot".
And yes, the yandere is planned to be male. I'm not really interested in attracting the highest number of readers, so I'm taking liberties and just writing what I really want, haha
I'm happy that my typos didn't bother you! My first language is Spanish, and I don't have any beta readers, so I can't really do much about that! :(
I will try to work on that, though!!
I'm crying so badly over this omg like the comment below is there a set date for chapter 1? :D
Thank you! I gave more information in the comment below, but I'm adding new content to the game before November ends!
okay thank you so much for your workkk!!
god, IT WAS SO GOOD ! i can't wait for chapter 1 !! Is there a release date for the next chapter ?
Thank you! Chapter 1 was planned to be released this month, but since I had the masochist idea of having three different plotlines, it's becoming a monster to write, haha! Still, this way you'll feel like choices really matter, so it's going to be worth it.
I'm updating the game before November ends anyway, but it will just have one plotline, I'm doing this since I promised my followers on Tumblr new content and I want to keep my word. The complete Chapter 1... may be done in two months, haha...
Grasping at my screen, foaming at the mouth. My impatience is screaming at me right now. Can’t wait for the next update, holy moly! <3
Aw, thank you for the kind words!!
Omg a yandere if! Giving you million kisses❥ Can't wait for the next update!
Thank you <3!
i bit those mfs and i wanna do it more. can't wait for more!!!
HAHA! I'm actually making that a running joke, you'll get to bite more people!!
YESSS!! YOU'RE THE BEST!!
I LOVEEEE the plot omg I haven't even read it yet but I'm so excited AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Thank you!! I hope you liked it even after reading my prologue!
Saying that I love it too is very obvious, but me too!! And thank you! I plan to have Chapter 1 ready for late November :D
Could you add grey eyes if that's not a problem? 🙏
Of course! And I'll also add more hair colors in the next update!
Thank you! 😊
also to add onto that, maybe sage green eye color? if you would, thank you!
Yeah, it's no problem!
Amazing story and I love the variation with text choices. I hope that further progress will come and that this game gets all the recognition it deserves! ^^
Thanks! Text variation is one of my favorite things in IF, and I want to expand on that in Chapter 1
This was so good! I'm really looking forward to what's to come!!
Thank you! I'll write a real spectacle!
Thanks! I have a lot of "fun" times planned >:)
Wow, very cool prologue ! Some typos, but none so bad I couldn't understand the sentence. And the project seems cool, can't wait to see more !
I'm happy the typos weren't so bad, but I'll work on that!
Thank you for the comment!
THIS LOOKS SO GOOD, very promising from the premise of the prologue to the main theme of corruption (+18 too WOOOOH)!!! I always wanted to play a relationship where the love interest sees the main character and straight up goes "Are you tired of being nice? Don't you just want to go ape shit?" so thank you for your services especially as your first project (thats awesome), corruption doesn't miss <3
I like redemption arcs as much as the next person, but corruption arcs?? Those are my favorite! I want the game to be very flexible, so your fall from grace can be as slow (or fast) as you want. Maybe you’ll even end up becoming too much for the LI, haha!
Thank you very much for the support <3
I cant wait to read more! this is so exciting!
Thank you! Progress on Chapter 1 has been going well, so you won't wait for too long!
I love this so far! I saw a typo, it's when MC is running away "Look kid, we're taking you whenever you want it or not" I'm guessing it's supposed to be whether.
Anyway! Omg I'm so excited for the first chapter! This is right up my alley, will Aiken be an ongoing character and possible LI?
Whoops! English is my second language, so typos sometimes escape me. Thank you for pointing that out!!
And about Aiken... His "screen time" will depend on your choices, and that's all I'm going to say >:)
No worries! I wasn't bothered by it at all and yay! So excited to read more. Thank you for sharing this story with us :)
This is so great! Finally a story with adult themes and amazing writing. I really love it and cannot wait for moooooore 🖤
I'll do my best, so stay tuned :D!!
Thank you! All the support really means the world to me <3
Oh my gosh the prologue is just amazing, plus my mc can have a yandere love interest in the future that just makes this game even more exciting
Thanks! I've always wanted a fantasy story with a yandere LI, so I just had to make one :D
OK these inquisitors types pissed me off I am a type of person who fights to the bitter end and they just declared war on my belief
Want some revenge?? You'll get some!
No no no no I want both revenge I want a fucking war Not just a normal war a holy war I'm being personal in this story but you You did a good job Make me feel like this. There are things you should never do Force children to be a sacrifice Or make them be soldiers For your religion Say it was just cause I mean that shows the rot Of your organization In my opinion I think there's more That I am Going to hate in this organization I am being forced into Though I can't wait and see You're gonna throw at me Timidlon And I wish you a good luck on what you're making here
Are you kidding me?
This is amazing and so well written ;_;
I can't wait for more ✨
Thanks! I guess writing all those fanfics paid off, haha!
the way the prologue took my breath away. OMG I cannot wait for more-- tysm for making this! Best of luck! <3
Thank you for the kind words!
Need to say, I'm in love with the premise of this game! What little we see in this short demo is enough to foreshadow the corruption of this world, and I'm so excited to see what the rest of the story has in store! My one regret is our mother tho, I do worry about what happened to her :/
Do you perhaps have a development blog for this game? I'd love to keep myself updated on this IF :D
I have a lot of plans for this world, and some of those revolve around Leonor! Haha!
And I've been thinking about making a blog, but I'll wait until I have Chapter 1 ready, so I can properly introduce all the characters.
Thanks for the comment <3!
hello hi omg I love u this game is—
I find another masterpiece at 3AM again LMAO
I hope u know this but I know this story gonna be amazing . I’m waiting for the next chapters!!
Ahhhh!! Thank you! This is just me laying the groundwork for the good stuff, so I hope you like the things to come! And hey, thanks for being the first commenter <3
awkwkwkwkw u r so cute 😭😭 it’s nothing u deserve it!! Hope ur game get more recognition!
Have a nice day!!❤️❤️❤️💕