Amazing story and I love the variation with text choices. I hope that further progress will come and that this game gets all the recognition it deserves! ^^
THIS LOOKS SO GOOD, very promising from the premise of the prologue to the main theme of corruption (+18 too WOOOOH)!!! I always wanted to play a relationship where the love interest sees the main character and straight up goes "Are you tired of being nice? Don't you just want to go ape shit?" so thank you for your services especially as your first project (thats awesome), corruption doesn't miss <3
I like redemption arcs as much as the next person, but corruption arcs?? Those are my favorite! I want the game to be very flexible, so your fall from grace can be as slow (or fast) as you want. Maybe you’ll even end up becoming too much for the LI, haha!
I love this so far! I saw a typo, it's when MC is running away "Look kid, we're taking you whenever you want it or not" I'm guessing it's supposed to be whether.
Anyway! Omg I'm so excited for the first chapter! This is right up my alley, will Aiken be an ongoing character and possible LI?
No no no no I want both revenge I want a fucking war Not just a normal war a holy war I'm being personal in this story but you You did a good job Make me feel like this. There are things you should never do Force children to be a sacrifice Or make them be soldiers For your religion Say it was just cause I mean that shows the rot Of your organization In my opinion I think there's more That I am Going to hate in this organization I am being forced into Though I can't wait and see You're gonna throw at me Timidlon And I wish you a good luck on what you're making here
Need to say, I'm in love with the premise of this game! What little we see in this short demo is enough to foreshadow the corruption of this world, and I'm so excited to see what the rest of the story has in store! My one regret is our mother tho, I do worry about what happened to her :/
Do you perhaps have a development blog for this game? I'd love to keep myself updated on this IF :D
Ahhhh!! Thank you! This is just me laying the groundwork for the good stuff, so I hope you like the things to come! And hey, thanks for being the first commenter <3
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Amazing story and I love the variation with text choices. I hope that further progress will come and that this game gets all the recognition it deserves! ^^
Thanks! Text variation is one of my favorite things in IF, and I want to expand on that in Chapter 1
This was so good! I'm really looking forward to what's to come!!
Thank you! I'll write a real spectacle!
Thanks! I have a lot of "fun" times planned >:)
Wow, very cool prologue ! Some typos, but none so bad I couldn't understand the sentence. And the project seems cool, can't wait to see more !
I'm happy the typos weren't so bad, but I'll work on that!
Thank you for the comment!
THIS LOOKS SO GOOD, very promising from the premise of the prologue to the main theme of corruption (+18 too WOOOOH)!!! I always wanted to play a relationship where the love interest sees the main character and straight up goes "Are you tired of being nice? Don't you just want to go ape shit?" so thank you for your services especially as your first project (thats awesome), corruption doesn't miss <3
I like redemption arcs as much as the next person, but corruption arcs?? Those are my favorite! I want the game to be very flexible, so your fall from grace can be as slow (or fast) as you want. Maybe you’ll even end up becoming too much for the LI, haha!
Thank you very much for the support <3
I cant wait to read more! this is so exciting!
Thank you! Progress on Chapter 1 has been going well, so you won't wait for too long!
I love this so far! I saw a typo, it's when MC is running away "Look kid, we're taking you whenever you want it or not" I'm guessing it's supposed to be whether.
Anyway! Omg I'm so excited for the first chapter! This is right up my alley, will Aiken be an ongoing character and possible LI?
Whoops! English is my second language, so typos sometimes escape me. Thank you for pointing that out!!
And about Aiken... His "screen time" will depend on your choices, and that's all I'm going to say >:)
No worries! I wasn't bothered by it at all and yay! So excited to read more. Thank you for sharing this story with us :)
This is so great! Finally a story with adult themes and amazing writing. I really love it and cannot wait for moooooore 🖤
I'll do my best, so stay tuned :D!!
Thank you! All the support really means the world to me <3
Oh my gosh the prologue is just amazing, plus my mc can have a yandere love interest in the future that just makes this game even more exciting
Thanks! I've always wanted a fantasy story with a yandere LI, so I just had to make one :D
OK these inquisitors types pissed me off I am a type of person who fights to the bitter end and they just declared war on my belief
Want some revenge?? You'll get some!
No no no no I want both revenge I want a fucking war Not just a normal war a holy war I'm being personal in this story but you You did a good job Make me feel like this. There are things you should never do Force children to be a sacrifice Or make them be soldiers For your religion Say it was just cause I mean that shows the rot Of your organization In my opinion I think there's more That I am Going to hate in this organization I am being forced into Though I can't wait and see You're gonna throw at me Timidlon And I wish you a good luck on what you're making here
Are you kidding me?
This is amazing and so well written ;_;
I can't wait for more ✨
Thanks! I guess writing all those fanfics paid off, haha!
the way the prologue took my breath away. OMG I cannot wait for more-- tysm for making this! Best of luck! <3
Thank you for the kind words!
Need to say, I'm in love with the premise of this game! What little we see in this short demo is enough to foreshadow the corruption of this world, and I'm so excited to see what the rest of the story has in store! My one regret is our mother tho, I do worry about what happened to her :/
Do you perhaps have a development blog for this game? I'd love to keep myself updated on this IF :D
I have a lot of plans for this world, and some of those revolve around Leonor! Haha!
And I've been thinking about making a blog, but I'll wait until I have Chapter 1 ready, so I can properly introduce all the characters.
Thanks for the comment <3!
hello hi omg I love u this game is—
I find another masterpiece at 3AM again LMAO
I hope u know this but I know this story gonna be amazing . I’m waiting for the next chapters!!
Ahhhh!! Thank you! This is just me laying the groundwork for the good stuff, so I hope you like the things to come! And hey, thanks for being the first commenter <3
awkwkwkwkw u r so cute 😭😭 it’s nothing u deserve it!! Hope ur game get more recognition!
Have a nice day!!❤️❤️❤️💕